Commentary:

Fayrore, 03 Sep 2008 07:24 pm

O: A real page?!

It's true. Here we have a close-up of the Beedrills. And also, a pansy-effort at shading... I think I'm going to experiment on these next couple of pages. I'm trying to decide how is best looking/fastest for me...

ALSO: Thanks everyone for your comments on Hollo~ I'm glad most of you liked him OuO.

edit: To show my appreciation, I've replied to all of them (on previous page) 8'D

Discussion:

PACHIbamu, 03 Sep 2008 07:25 pm

interesting design o wo

Fayrore, 03 Sep 2008 07:34 pm

Thanks xD I hope they resemble Beedrills closely enough...

amjam, 03 Sep 2008 07:50 pm

Attractive Beedrills.

Makes me actually want to train one now xD I've never taken much notice.

GO, ROBIN! er, I mean, TOCHU! Protect! Peck! Sky Uppercut!

PACHIbamu, 03 Sep 2008 07:58 pm

oh, you can tell all right. o wo

/lulz i never, ever touch a beedrill again after i box it 8D;;;;;;;

Shuuichi, 03 Sep 2008 09:35 pm

That last Beedrill is damn sexy. xD

Cooro (Guest), 03 Sep 2008 09:49 pm

I HEAR JOO LIEK BEEDRILLZ! ;O I like them beedrills.
Purrrr~r!

Ohmaigawd!
Do they carry around like lances for stingers?

That would be pretty bomb..
o 3o

Pokemon?, 03 Sep 2008 09:50 pm

"I'm a girl..." Haha, I love it when people say that... XD

Jynsing, 03 Sep 2008 10:16 pm

Critique time! (no flames plz, lulz sj)
Those last four panels are really hard to read...did you mean to have the reader look at all three Beedrill, and then Machi? It might have worked better to have them each shown in three, parallel panels, then one panel of Machi underneath. Also, those crooked lines really take away from the suspense of the scene for me. D':

I am looking forward to how this plays out though. >D

Phoenix of Chaos, 04 Sep 2008 03:16 pm

OH MY GODS, AN UPDATE!
I apologize for the Caps, they were nessecary to show my surprise.
And yes, "Gods" is accurate. I will say no more on the matter.

TigerChickTigriss, 05 Sep 2008 12:32 am

YAYS! An update! :3 I can't wait to see how all of those pokemon look.

Marluxia, 06 Sep 2008 01:00 am

Simply amazing <3
5/5 fav'd I love Tochu's design and the Beedrills :D

Digi (Guest), 06 Sep 2008 01:00 pm

Hot beedrill guys. NICE. xD

EthrilDragoni, 10 Sep 2008 01:11 am

the last beedrill obviously feels sorry for her...I wonder if other pokemon realize she can see what they really look like, or do they not realize it until she starts talking to them?

crazyfrog1234, 14 Sep 2008 12:05 am

I hope these beedrills have clothes in the next update.

Tyto Alba, 15 Sep 2008 03:53 pm

I just noticed how they're carrying sword-lance-stinger things. Freakin' sweet.

And um, I agree with Shuuichi. :3

animefreak0701 (Guest), 15 Sep 2008 09:35 pm

I LIEK SEXAY BEEDRILL. 8DDD
As in, the last one.<333
Beedrills usually scare the crap outta me too. ;^; Like... when my Pokémon are young/weak and one comes out of nowhere to beat them up. D8;

Ack, good luck with this Machi! o-o
Pray for a smexy Butterfree or something to show up~ xDD <3

Momus, 20 Sep 2008 11:21 pm

Great comic! I can't wait to see the haunter come in (fav'd).

Naya, 11 Oct 2008 04:54 pm

I, too, very muchly like the hawt and smexy beedrill (last panel)... Mesah dink dat he should go wif Machi, mesah do! [/starwars reference, and total geekyness x3]

Takyume, 25 Nov 2008 10:29 am

in the last panel the beedrill looks abit worried

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