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Reply Fayrore, September 3rd, 2008, 7:24 pm

O: A real page?!

It's true. Here we have a close-up of the Beedrills. And also, a pansy-effort at shading... I think I'm going to experiment on these next couple of pages. I'm trying to decide how is best looking/fastest for me...

ALSO: Thanks everyone for your comments on Hollo~ I'm glad most of you liked him OuO.

edit: To show my appreciation, I've replied to all of them (on previous page) 8'D

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Reply PACHIbamu, September 3rd, 2008, 7:25 pm

interesting design o wo

Reply Fayrore, September 3rd, 2008, 7:34 pm

Thanks xD I hope they resemble Beedrills closely enough...

Reply amjam, September 3rd, 2008, 7:50 pm

Attractive Beedrills.

Makes me actually want to train one now xD I've never taken much notice.

GO, ROBIN! er, I mean, TOCHU! Protect! Peck! Sky Uppercut!

Reply PACHIbamu, September 3rd, 2008, 7:58 pm

oh, you can tell all right. o wo

/lulz i never, ever touch a beedrill again after i box it 8D;;;;;;;

Reply Shuuichi, September 3rd, 2008, 9:35 pm

That last Beedrill is damn sexy. xD

Reply Cooro (Guest), September 3rd, 2008, 9:49 pm

I HEAR JOO LIEK BEEDRILLZ! ;O I like them beedrills.

Do they carry around like lances for stingers?

That would be pretty bomb..
o 3o

Reply Pokemon?, September 3rd, 2008, 9:50 pm

"I'm a girl..." Haha, I love it when people say that... XD

Reply Jynsing, September 3rd, 2008, 10:16 pm

Critique time! (no flames plz, lulz sj)
Those last four panels are really hard to read...did you mean to have the reader look at all three Beedrill, and then Machi? It might have worked better to have them each shown in three, parallel panels, then one panel of Machi underneath. Also, those crooked lines really take away from the suspense of the scene for me. D':

I am looking forward to how this plays out though. >D

Reply Phoenix of Chaos, September 4th, 2008, 3:16 pm

I apologize for the Caps, they were nessecary to show my surprise.
And yes, "Gods" is accurate. I will say no more on the matter.

Reply TigerChickTigriss, September 5th, 2008, 12:32 am

YAYS! An update! :3 I can't wait to see how all of those pokemon look.

Reply Digi (Guest), September 6th, 2008, 1:00 pm

Hot beedrill guys. NICE. xD

Reply EthrilDragoni, September 10th, 2008, 1:11 am

the last beedrill obviously feels sorry for her...I wonder if other pokemon realize she can see what they really look like, or do they not realize it until she starts talking to them?

Reply animefreak0701 (Guest), September 15th, 2008, 9:35 pm

As in, the last one.<333
Beedrills usually scare the crap outta me too. ;^; Like... when my Pokémon are young/weak and one comes out of nowhere to beat them up. D8;

Ack, good luck with this Machi! o-o
Pray for a smexy Butterfree or something to show up~ xDD <3

Reply Momus, September 20th, 2008, 11:21 pm

Great comic! I can't wait to see the haunter come in (fav'd).

Reply Naya, October 11th, 2008, 4:54 pm

I, too, very muchly like the hawt and smexy beedrill (last panel)... Mesah dink dat he should go wif Machi, mesah do! [/starwars reference, and total geekyness x3]

Reply Takyume, November 25th, 2008, 10:29 am

in the last panel the beedrill looks abit worried

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